Based on the feedback I received from my peers Emma and Sally, they thought that I needed to expand on my lesson plan as they think that it is too simple but because of the year group I have used for my lesson I don’t believe it needs to be made anymore complex because otherwise the students might feel that the lesson is asking them for too much. From the feedback I did see that I need to go through and re-read my entries for grammatical errors and such. The only changes I made to my blog was editing and adding more graphics to make it interesting and appealing to the idea, this is because I did not believe I needed to change my lesson plan I choose to leave it as it was.
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on May 14, 2014